hellzlaker's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dot Dot Dot]

no well defined rythm

i mean it sounds like you tried, but vocals are off beat, there is no rythm, beat is not catchy

[Firebanesword's Techno Theme]

this is not good

my 5 year old song makes better songs

[Over My Head (Cover) (Incomp)]

a good attempt

voting 0 is just disrespectful but i will admit after hearing this i really am tempted too. anyway i was a bit lenient. 2.90 / 5.00 (- 0.24)

[Firebanesword's Theme (REDONE)]

ok mister

this is not music, my retard brother billo can press couple keys every few seconds

[Policy on Rape]

i feel bad

some one sounds like he got raped with a strapon by a chick

[Progressive Trance]

ohhh yeahhh

orgasmic...

[kangaroo on extacy (unfinished]

would you like 10 cookies

i would

[ParagonX9 - Chaoz Impact]

not so good

while this length is perfect for flashes, you should really make an attempt to make your songs longer. The intro was really short and the transitions were quick, leaving no room for the intense buildups commonly found in DnB. I'm sure you know, but just in that rare case that you may be unaware, 64 bar intro, 64 bar drop, 32 bar middle, 64 bar drop 2, 32 bar ending is a common sequencing template. You don't have to start the song right with a melody off the bat, start building up an atmosphere using pads or what not, bring in some drums around the 32 bar, and then use a commonn kick buildup to transition into the 32 bar middle, sequence the melody theme in between both the intro and drop. Use the middle to take out that melody and show off the sickness of the reese, and maybe introduce the new melody in the next drop. Sometimes setting up a template will help act as guide in aid of making longer tracks, which I think you should try and more people would be able to roll to it.

[[APPS] Waps APPS (full)]

pind me an apple

or 2

[Ring of Fire (Cover)]

penis

nice sound like fucking some 0ne in @SS