no well defined rythm

i mean it sounds like you tried, but vocals are off beat, there is no rythm, beat is not catchy

this is not good

my 5 year old song makes better songs

a good attempt

voting 0 is just disrespectful but i will admit after hearing this i really am tempted too. anyway i was a bit lenient. 2.90 / 5.00 (- 0.24)